This week we have been focusing on writing about special person in the school.
I chose Miss Wentworth who was my teacher last year. Here is what I wrote:
A special person in the school is Miss Wentworth. She is special because she speaks kindly to me. She is calm and caring to my friends and l. Her qualities are lovely, positive and great! When I am in her classroom I feel happy!😎👻✌
I like everything about this writing. It is cool. It was hard work... and took me ages... but it was fun to do. I am glad I wrote about Miss Wentworth.
Tell me what you think about my writing?
Zane, I love your writing about Miss Wentworth. I agree, Miss Wentworth is a fabulous teacher, kind and caring. I like that your writing has included the correct punctuation and makes sense. You have used some fabulous vocab in your writing - qualities, positive.
ReplyDeleteHave you shown your writing to Miss Wentworth?
Venessa Davan - Manaiakalani Outreach Facilitator.